http://druid77.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] druid77.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aptsvet 2005-09-10 02:48 pm (UTC)

Re: Заразили ;)

Да, действительно. Кроме того, вижу пару неудачных эпитетов. "Робкие" лучше заменить на "мелкие", "нешуточные" тоже бы заменить на чего-нибудь.
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