http://zimina.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] zimina.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aptsvet 2008-08-21 08:52 am (UTC)

отличное стихотворение, насыщенное, точное
(в последней строфе первая строка - "а" надо заменить на "в", описка.
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