http://dassie2001.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] dassie2001.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aptsvet 2010-12-04 08:24 am (UTC)

Классно, концовка особенно.

Конечно, как полный дуб в поэзии, я дико извиняюсь, но в первой строфе в последней строчке второе "без" - лишнее.
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