http://masaccio.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] masaccio.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aptsvet 2007-01-27 05:23 pm (UTC)

Лучше "как происходит/случается осенью", без "бы", для передачи естественности происходящего без поэтического сравнения которого нет в оригинале.
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