Date: 2005-09-03 09:12 am (UTC)
I am trying to pull a syntactic double entendre here, the way I do in my Russian poems. It is possible that I am still not deft enough to do it in English properly within its own rules. 'Some' is definitely an adverb here, as in 'give some'. I will wait to see how Philip reacts to this before any tinkering. The two lines in question are supposed to mean: when you pester (him) for your daily bread, pray a bit for our weekly.
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